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  1. 1

    chnawal

    heyy dearrr how can i read this story… i read the prologue of this story on IF but m not able to get next parts plzzzz helppp…. i m rallyyy eager to read it

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    1. 1.1

      monaswritess

      Heyy dear, Im sorry but this story has been removed from both IF and blog. Now you have to wait for its printed version.

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  2. 2

    fatimasana359

    Hii di
    How can i read this story?

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    1. 2.1

      monaswrite

      Hey Fatima. I will repost this story here. Then u can read 🙂

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  3. 3

    fatimasana359

    Di whenever u post this ff plz send me a pm on IF
    My username on IF is sanafatima35

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  4. 4

    hira1999

    Hi… Got ur blog link.. Eagerly waiting for ur updates… But please keep updating on IF when u will update ur story on blog via post or pm… Thanx

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    1. 4.1

      monaswrite

      Hi Hira. I will post another FFs updates on IF but for this one, I will post only here.

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  5. 5

    --mittu--

    Beautifully written di!!
    The way u described their feelings and longings were awesome
    both r orphan 🙁 and Yearning for love
    chi…aisa bhi hota hai kya..ek aurat hokar woh warden aise kaam har rahi hai
    omg!! Bechari geet 🙁
    Loving this story!!
    thank u soo much for the pm di!!

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  6. 6

    mskdeewani

    interesting start
    who is this man?????

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  7. 7

    kamnagupta7

    interesting start
    geet is orphan.
    maan is also alone.
    warden asks man to select any girl.
    he selected geet nd she is sold to dat man.

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  8. 8

    taahir004

    Intriguing Start

    Both Maan and Geet are orphans while Geet loves to dream
    Maan is living the dream she lives in an orphanage and he lives
    in luxury
    now Geet has just been sold to this 40 years old man

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  9. 9

    srideviss

    awesome concept… both are orphan and yearning for love … hope will be saved from that lusty old man….

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  10. 10

    manjeet6

    Beautiful update
    Both are lonely
    Ek apne dreams ko Pana chahti hai tou ek apne dreams mai hi ji raha hai
    You very well described both ‘s part of life
    Omg I hate the warden jisne khuch paiso ke liye Geet ki life daav par laga di
    Beautifully written
    Loved it

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  11. 11

    geethuisabseparyi

    it simply awesome
    both alone
    geet didn’t know about world out side
    she only read it about in book
    warden selling girls fr money

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  12. 12

    bridsof

    Just came across…
    Turned to be worth while
    ..as prologue goes..with name of fiction..
    It’s interesting…

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    1. 12.1

      monaswrite

      Thanks 🙂

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  13. 13

    maaneet0887

    awesome prologue waiting for next!

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  14. 14

    kkawanpreet97

    wonderful update..
    both maaneet are orphan.
    and want love in their life.
    geet being sold to some creepy oldy..

    loved it

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  15. 15

    Huma

    Wowww loved it awesome update

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  16. 16

    sowmiya5

    Lovely start dear
    Loved the way u have penned the leads pain and yearnings
    Hope their reach their Destiny !! The prologue goes well with the title dear
    The warden turned out to be the witch who sells girls for Money
    IFname : anu5

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